One of the theatrical groups my daughter performs with wanted to bring some gothic horror to the stage. My mind immediately jumped to the scariest stuff I’ve ever read; the works of HP Lovecraft. Now, most of his stories could never be depicted on a stage (if you’ve ever read his stuff, you’ll know what I’m talking about - or just look at the pictures below!),
so I took this as a challenge. Could I turn one of his stories
into a stage play? As I perused his stories, one stood out as a possibility. I
tackled the project, and as a result, ended up having a great time adapting it.
There were inherent problems - the result of the difference between the
framework of a book and the limitations of a stage, but solving them was a fun
mental exercise. And I think I succeeded. The play is based on Lovecraft’s “The
Thing on the Doorstep” (now public domain), and since other acting companies
may want to perform it, I am posting a portion of Act I below. If a group is interested in performing it, contact me and I’ll provide
the script. It’s a full-length 2-act play, a labor of love, and I humbly think
it’s one of the best stage adaptations of an HP Lovecraft story. Enjoy!
THE THING ON THE DOORSTEP
By
H.P.LOVECRAFT
1933
Stage Adaptation by
Steven Reinagel 2011
ACT I
INT. LIBRARY. SPOTLIGHT CENTER-STAGE
DAN UPTON stumbles into spotlight from stage left.
His clothes are disheveled and blood-spattered. He is carrying a revolver.
DAN
UPTON
It is true that I have
sent six bullets through the head of my best friend, and yet I hope you will
come to believe that I am not his murderer. At first I shall be called a madman
- madder than the man I shot in his cell at the Arkham Sanitarium. Some day
others will weigh each statement, correlate it with the known facts, and ask
themselves how I could have believed otherwise than I did after facing the
evidence of that horror - that thing on the doorstep.
Stage lights come up.
EDWARD DERBY casually strolls in from stage right and stands, looking around
him. Dan turns to look at him.
DAN UPTON
So I say that I have
not murdered Edward Derby. Rather have I avenged him, and in so doing purged
the earth of a horror whose survival might have loosed untold terrors on all
mankind.
(begins backing up stage left, continuing to
look at Edward)
There are black zones
of shadow close to our daily paths, and now and then some evil soul breaks a
passage through. When that happens, the man who knows must strike before
reckoning the consequences.
(exits stage left)
Edward’s father enters
and looks around, clearly pleased. Edward’s mother enters last, slowly, hugging
herself and looking uncertain.
MR. DERBY
A good choice, Miskatonic
University. See, you don’t have to go to Harvard to get a degree in, um...
EDWARD
English and...
MR. DERBY
English and French
literature. And so close to home you can walk - which will be good for you. Isn’t
that right, dear?
MRS.
DERBY
Yes, certainly. It will be good to have you staying
near by.
EDWARD
Well, they do have an excellent library here. It
should be a great help to my poetry.
MR. DERBY
Yes, and didn’t your friend Dan say he would even
illustrate your poetry book for you?
EDWARD
Oh, he’s given that idea up. He really can’t draw.
MR. DERBY
But isn’t he going to school for architecture?
EDWARD
Well, he can draw buildings, just not draw...the
things I write about.
Edward finds a book on a shelf and seems very happy
about his discovery, but hides it from his parents. He places it carefully on
top of the shelf.
MRS. DERBY
(looking about)
And speaking of Daniel
- where is he? I thought he was going to stop by and say goodbye before he
left.
DAN UPTON rushes in
from stage right.
DAN
I’m here! All packed.
My train leaves in twenty minutes. So Ed, what do you say?
EDWARD
(looks around, then smiles at
Dan)
I’ll have this place
licked in three years!
DAN
That’s the spirit! I
wish I could feel the same about Harvard.
MR. DERBY
Dan, tell me; how is
your father these days?
DAN
Not so well, I’m
afraid. This New England weather takes such a toll on his respiratory system.
We may have to move him south before long.
(He suddenly looks at his watch)
I can’t stay. Just
came for a quick goodbye.
MR. DERBY
Let us drive you to
the station.
MRS. DERBY
Oh, yes, We’ll be
happy to. Come on, Edward.
EDWARD
You go ahead. I want
to stay and prowl about a bit.
(He walks over to Dan. The two grasp each
other’s arms)
Best of luck, old
chum.
DAN
Same to you. Be sure
to mail me some of your poetry.
Dan and Mr. and Mrs.
Derby exit. Edward retrieves the book. He continues scouring the bookshelves,
rounds a corner and slams into ASENATH WAITE, a young, dark-haired woman.
ASENATH
Damnation and hell!
EDWARD
Oh, I’m so sorry. I didn’t see...forgive me.
ASENATH
(Calms
and looks intently at him)
No, pardon me. You must be new here.
EDWARD
Yes, starting classes this fall.
(Awkward silence follows. She slowly extends a
hand)
ASENATH
I’m Asenath Waite.
EDWARD
Um, Edward. Edward Derby. A pleasure to meet you. Hmmm...Waite...You’re
from Innsmouth, aren’t you?
ASENATH
Yes, the fishing village. My family has lived there
for generations.
EDWARD
I remember your father - Ephraim. I used to see him
passing through town. He would visit this very library.
ASENATH
On occasion. There are some volumes here that can’t
be found anywhere else. What book do you have there?
EDWARD
This? The Book of Eibon.
ASENATH
Good book.
EDWARD
You’ve read it?
ASENATH
Indeed. You could say I know it forwards and
backwards.
(She
slides the book from his hands and opens
it to a page)
‘And on
hands and knees I toiled along the slick and fetid corridor that wound through
the Vale of Pnath, past the mountains of bones, all the while aware of vengeful
eyes that longed only to consume me. Between the Peaks of Thok the temple lay,
its chiseled horns upraised to receive its sacrifice - the spot into which all the ghouls of the waking world
cast the refuse of their feastings’.
(She returns the book)
So, this kind of stuff
interests you?
EDWARD
Oh, I’ve always been
curious about arcane lore, mythology - you know, the old gods. Probably comes
from being locked up inside for most of my childhood. Had to find some means of
escape. So it became books.
ASENATH
Locked up? How sad.
EDWARD
Oh, I don’t mean
literally. It didn’t help that I was an only child, and certainly not the
healthiest one, at that.
ASENATH
Didn’t let you out of
their sight, huh?
EDWARD
Not a chance. And when
they did let me outside to play, I had to have my nurse with me. But I write,
too - that’s been my other back door - my gateway to some freedom.
ASENATH
Really? What do you
write?
EDWARD
Poetry, mostly. I’m
building my compilation, hope to have it printed some day. It’s called ‘The
Shadow of Azathoth and Other Horrors’. Sounds disturbing, I know.
ASENATH
Oh, not really. I
think I can understand it little, looking at where you grew up. I thought my
town was chilling, but Arkham - sagging gothic roofs, crumbling edifices, hanging
over the banks of the cold, dark Miskatonic River. And the legends I’ve heard -
intriguing, I could say, to put it nicely.
EDWARD
Innsmouth isn’t
without its share of tales, either.
ASENATH
Tall tales. You know, if you really want to study
books like this, (she digs through her purse and produces a pencil and piece of
paper) books that don’t shy away from addressing the peculiar and arcane, we’re
having a gathering of "intelligentsia" in one of the student rooms
next week. (she writes something down and tears the page out) Here is the room
number. I think we’ll be talking about the nature of consciousness and about
its independence of the physical frame. I do hope you can come. (she gives him
a strangely intense gaze)
EDWARD
(Looking from the note to her)
Oh, certainly. I...I
look forward to it.
ASENATH
And you should. I think
your education here will be...most illuminating.
Hi, I don't see any contact information, but I'd really like to see your script for THE THING ON THE DOORSTEP. In addition to being a Lovecraft fan, I'm on the board of our local community theater in Mansfield, Ohio. We're always on the lookout for something scary--an alternative to the comedies that we always end up doing. Anyway, my e-mail is jmoser1 at ashland.edu. Thanks!
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ReplyDeleteMy Drama class is in the process of selecting a play to put on and yours caught my attention. I was wondering if you could send us the complete script for us to take a look at. My school email is brendonly at johnmccraess.ocdsb.ca and if you could reply as soon as possible, it would be greatly appreciated, as it seems the pressure is mounting for us.
Thank You,
Brendon Ly.
Hello Brendon,
DeleteI emailed the entire script to the email address you provided. Please let me know if it reached you or not. If not, send me an alternate email. Thanks.
I am a company member of the Montana Actor's Theatre, and I was looking for an H P Lovecraft play for our October show. I would love to Direct your adaptation, you can email me at pulanotutor AT gmail.com
ReplyDeleteHello, i really want to read your entire script. I am a member of an english group on Uruguay and want to propose an horror night. Thank you very much
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I teach drama and direct at a school in Knoxville, TN. Would you mind sending me the full text of your play; I'm curious to see if it would be a good fit for my students.
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Stephen
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Hi Stephen,
ReplyDeleteMy wife has been looking for something for her Grand Guignol company to stage, and I think that your adaptation of 'The Thing on the Doorstep' (always one of my favourite Lovecraft stories) might be just the thing. Would it be possible to see the whole script? My email address is: ajlane@ntlworld.com.
Thanks,
Andy Lane
Hello, I'd love to read your full script.
ReplyDeleteMy drama class is looking for plays for our fall show this year and your adaptation seems perfect for what we're looking for.
Could you see me the full script?
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I am a member of The Actors' Mission, a non-profit community theatre in Rock Springs, Wyoming. I am VERY interested in this play. H.P. Lovecraft is my favorite author, and i would love to present this to the board for a future production. If i could get a copy of this script i would greatly appreciate it. thank you very much!
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Hi Steven, I’m head of the artistic committee for our community theatre group and interested in acquiring the full script for this adaptation. Please email me at davemyles@gmail.com.
ReplyDeleteThis is so great. I am very interested in reading the whole thing. Please and thank you.
ReplyDeleteHello Ivan,
DeleteSure - it's going through some minor edits right now, but I will send out as soon as it's done. Send me your email address.
Steven, I'd love to take a look at the full script. We are interested in doing some of Lovecraft's work. shakescar at gmail.com
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ReplyDeleteI'd love to put on a production of this with my am dram group. Your excerpt is excellent.
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many thanks
Hello Steven
ReplyDeleteI am really interested in reading the whole script! I think it's excellent! If that's possible i provide you with my email address (assendegoras@yahoo.com)
Thanks in advance!!
Hey there Steve,
ReplyDeleteI am leading an amatheur theatre group and would be really interested in adapting lovecraft on stage. Would you mind sending me your play? Your excerpt reads great and I reeealy like your style. Would love to have a read opf the whole play.
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Yes, I'm in germany. But since I'm an english teacher, I love to work with english texts. :)
Hello. My name is Bob Beathard. I am a playwrite and lyricist from Katy, Texas. I would like to transform your show into a musical. If I could possibly have the entire script, I could have something ready to show you in a week or two.
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Thank you.
Hi Bob - awesome! I replied with an email, so let me know if you received it.
DeleteHello! I am interested in directing your play! Could possibly email me information as to how to go about that? Royalties, scripts, etc. My email is bhchrysler@gmail.com
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Hello! I am a HS Drama Teacher currently living in Beirut, and I'm interested in possibly producing this play in the fall, or at the very least taking a look at the script. My school email is sburnham@acs.edu.lb.
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How could i get a full Script of this stage play? and would you be kind enough to send some more info on the play to my email xboom03@gmail.com please and thank you so much!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Steven,
ReplyDeleteI would very much like to see you whole manuscript as I would love to use it with my acting students in creating a radio play. With limited acting options currently, due to the pandemic, I thought a radio play would be a great experience and using some classic horror for our narrative would be even better!
If you are willing I would love to see the whole piece and if you are happy record it as a full cast radio drama.
Please let me know your thoughts.
Thomas
Hi Thomas,
DeleteShould not be a problem! Just have one question for you about it. Send me your email address. Thanks!
Hello!
ReplyDeleteI am very interested in reading the rest of your script and seeing if my community theater would put it on! My email address is euphoricshaolin@gmail.com
Thank you in advance!
Cory
Hi Mate!
ReplyDeleteSorry to bother you, I've been searching for an adaptation of lovecraft for ages and this is easily my favourite! I really love how you've done it. I'm interested in adapting it for a small theatre festival in Ireland to be performed by myself and some friends!
My email is marcusmacgabhann@gmail.com
All the best!
Fianna